Monday, November 3, 2008

Olfactory Love

I’d love to collect your breaths,
To hold them in my lungs,
And experience you,
Tangled within me.
Let the scent of you
Mix with my own.
As one we’d form
Something resembling,
The scent of love.

1 comment:

GG said...

this is a short, but captivating poem. ah, i love it! to go along with the cliche-thing we're doing, love involved in a poem can usually hold corny sayings but you definitely avoided all this with a powerful and descriptive language like using "tangled" and "collected". :)